S un shining on the
sizzling sand.
P iles of sand await me
as , I mount it on my hand.
O h my gosh, we have to
do press-ups again.
T he wind thundered
silently, through the crisp, clean air.
L ights strike me, there
force blinding me as I plummet onto the hard ground.
I n the water I dive, the
sleek water concealing me splash!
G reat big smiles
surround me, lighting me up with happiness.
H hungry for a big
delicious meal.
T he teams battle for the
most points.
Hello, I like the adjectives used here to paint a picture in my mind. I really enjoy acrostic poems! I am guessing it is about a class/school camp? There were a few slight errors, but only in punctuation and grammar. Please check out my blog at http://oksanazblog.blogspot.co.nz/ :)
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